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Friday, March 13, 2020

My naughty poem



Have you ever eaten all the lollies at the top of the panty? Hi, my name is Tyler and this is the poem that I made in literacy, I hade fun making this because it was joyful and fun thanks for reding put in the comments for any mistakes. 

1 comment:

  1. Hey Tyler,
    your poem was really fun to read and was also very joyful.
    But you did spell ´reading´ wrong in your description maybe that is something you could work on next time.
    great job.

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